Write-up for Hakeem's Landing Page

Hakeem offers a service of creating customised calendar and he needed help with the write for his landing page and so I offered to assist. Check it out:

ORIGINAL :

Looking for Personalised Calendars?
Looking for a unique birthday present?
Look no further...You have come to the right place!
Our design services offer you professionally designed personalised calendar, at affordable prices.
Just 4 Easy Steps!
Send us your photos
Specify the birthdates and any special request
In 3-4 weeks, Vet the design
Within 48 hours, a desk calendar arrived at your doorsteps
Special features and requests to add onto the calendar are welcomed. Please do not hesitate to drop me an email if you have any enquiry.
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Contact Us

For A No-Obligation Quote
email_me@nurhakeem.com
Tel : 90185094
www.nurhakeem.com







SALMAN's RECOMMENDATION:



Personalised Desk Calendar

Looking for Personalised Desk Calendars?
Looking for calendars as
unique birthday presents??
Corporate Gifts??
Group Mementos??
or just something special and personal close to your heart??

You have come to the right place!

For Quick Order:
Just 3 Easy Steps!

1.Send us your photos
2.Specify the birthdates and any special request
3.In 3-4 weeks, Vet the design

Within 48 hours, your own personalised-calendar arrives at your doorsteps!

CLICK HERE for QUICK ORDER



We GUARANTEE YOU professionally designed personalised-calendar at affordable prices


If you wish to see more of the designs we provide, join our mailing list and we will provide you with the catalogue!



we aim for YOUR SATISFACTION so here's what we offer you:

YOUR choice of Design/Template/
YOUR choice of Calendar Sizes
YOUR choice of delivery urgency
YOUR choice of number of orders
YOUR choice of payment method

On top of that, there is NO LIMIT to
the number of IMPORTANT DATES you want to be highlighted in your calendar
the number of PHOTOs you want to submit and
you can DEMAND to have ALL photos to be in the end-product whether we like it or not!



Comments and Reviews from customers:




To make an order just :

Remember, it's YOUR SATISFACTION we aim for!

Buying gifts and presents can always be a mind-boggling race so it's high time you get something different for your special someone, your party friends or it's even high time you impress your BOSS with a unique corporate gift for your company.

If it's not for others, it can be for your ownself! WHY NOT! it's your own treat! Lavish YOUR calendar with your favourite IDOL, favourite SPORTS or TEAM or even FOOD! the possibilites are endless!

So what are you waiting for?

Pick the type of Calendar (Personal/Corporate/Gift)
Pick a template/theme (Bubbles, lines, flowery etc.)
Pick the size
Pick the Colours
Enter Special Dates if available
Submit photos

and because we are aimed at YOUR SATISFACTION, we have different deals for different bundles. (Eg buy more than 1 is cheaper.)

MAKE YOUR ORDER NOW! click here

or

JOIN OUR MAILING LIST




Label: Corporate Calendar. Personalised Calendar. Customised Calendar. Corporate Gifts.

COPYRIGHT nurhakeem.com 2008






PS:
1.I suggest that not too many "exit links"(like links to your website etc) are available on your landing page.
2.The click-here's might require you to do more as in more webpages are required for the 'buying page'. 3.Payment methods i leave it to you as to whether you require your customer to make a deposit or not. If yes, that's where you need to learn more about merchant account (through payPAL) to accept payment.

whereas regarding whether the prices be available on the landing page itself, i would think it's more enticing to the reader if it's not available, but you might wanna get more opinions on these. anyways, hit me back and tell me what you think aight!